my first poem..


Near the sea walking with you

under the sun n sky is blue

bare foot hand in hand
dark clouds and wet sand

discussing about future love and life
and difference between friend and wife

love is feeling and sweet pain
its little lose n little gain
its on the roof in the rain

sit with me under "that" tree
i can wait when you feel free

lets lips do all the talk
sit with me please don't walk

now you are saying wait wait wait
then you'll say dear its too late

near the sea walking with you
under the sun n sky is blue...


3 comments:

Anamika said...

This POEM is rilly awsome... KEEP IT UP... [:)].. Take Care

Isha said...

just awesome :-)

joji said...

This is one is gud ......keep it up